W1D2 Activity 2: One Small Step for Man [4 points]
TASK DESCRIPTION:For this task , i have had to imagine that i was Neil Armstrong.i then had to write a short poem describing how i would have felt when i first set foot on the moon. i have chosen to use a google drawing to show my poem.
Talofa lava Hilary,
ReplyDeleteYou did a fantastic job describing what it would feel like if you were on the moon. I love the way you use rhyme throughout your poem. Very creative! :)
I really liked the colour and image you used to present your poem. Ka pai!
I have often thought about what it would be like to travel into space. I think if I had the opportunity to go there, I would probably stay because I'd miss my friends and family so much! Neil Armstrong was so brave going to the moon.
If you had the opportunity, would you go to the moon? I think the view would be phenomenal!
Noho ora mai
Erica
Hi Hilary,
ReplyDeleteIt is so awesome to see you participating in the SLJ! This is so worthwhile and will really help you as we get closer to school starting up again.
What has been your fave activity so far? I think this poster is really cool - especially astronaut Hilary!