Walt: to synthesise information across multiple texts
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Monday, 14 November 2016
Friday, 28 October 2016
Tuesday, 20 September 2016
Friday, 26 August 2016
Wednesday, 17 August 2016
The amazing flapping race
Walt: share our writing on our blogs in interesting ways.
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Tuesday, 16 August 2016
Friday, 12 August 2016
Friday, 5 August 2016
Wednesday, 3 August 2016
Thursday, 7 July 2016
Tuesday, 5 July 2016
Friday, 1 July 2016
stuck in a whale short story
Once there was superhero named Jake and a Gingerbread man named Jay. Jake and Jay were
best friends. Jake has black hair and Jay has
dark brown hair
on One sunny day Jay decided to go fishing with Jake at the creek in his boat but Jake forgot to bring his fishing net Jake had to go back home and grab his fishing net.suddenly a big whale came out of
nowhere and swallowed Jay Inside the whale it was dark and very smelly and yuck.
luckily jay brought a flashlight and his phone jay tried to call jake but he couldn’t because his phone was flat.
When jake came back to the creek he did not jay suddenly he heard someone saying help i'm stuck in a whale.It was Jay said jake to himself.
jake called out to jay to make a plan jake told jay the
plan jake’s plan was to tickle the whale so jay tickled the whale and the whale spat out Jay up high and jay landed on his boat and suddenly out of nowhere again and swallowed Jay Dun Dun Dun
The End
Tuesday, 28 June 2016
Friday, 24 June 2016
Wednesday, 15 June 2016
Monday, 23 May 2016
Friday, 20 May 2016
Wednesday, 18 May 2016
sunflower competition
Walt: understand multiple perspectives and viewpoints.
Wednesday, 16 March 2016
inside the earth watermelon
Tuesday, 8 March 2016
Monday, 7 March 2016
Gopher Story Introduction
It was a sunny Sunday, in the middle of a field of corn at a farm there was a dirty and very dusty road. Out of a small hole popped a clumsy fat gopher called Fred. Fred hadn’t eaten for days so was beginning to get get very angry. All he wanted was to eat some vegetables, actually anything would do because he was famished.
Saturday, 5 March 2016
two girls that think their the fastest kid in the world
Once upon a time there was a girl and her name was Rose. Rose has long brown and pink curly hair and light brown eyes.On one sunny day Rose went with her best friend lucy to the beach.Lucy
as brown and red hair and brown eyes Rose and lucy would always fight about who’s the fastest kid in school .
when rose and lucy got to the beach they started to have a race.
When the race started the race they ran so fast suddenly they saw a
crack in the earth and the only way to put the earth back together is to
run to the finish line at the same time and stop fighting about who’s the fastest kid in school.
So lucy and rose ran to the finish line at the same time and apologized to each other.The next day lucy and rose went to the beach again and started to fight again about who’s the fastest in the school.
Dun Dun Dun The End
Thursday, 3 March 2016
The three little pigs retel
In a far far away place there were three little pigs who lived with their mother one day they had to leave their home so their mother told them to look out for the big bad wolf the three little pig’s were looking a perfect place to stay and to build their home there
the first little pig was the youngest and made his house out of straw when the first little pig finish making out of straw he went inside and played his games suddenly the big bad wolf came and was on a mission to get the three little pigs to have for dinner .The big bad wolf knocked on the door little pig little pig let me in the big bad wolf said to the pig. the pig replied back to the big bad wolf not on the hairs of my chiny chin chin than the wolf said i will huff and puff and blow your house down so the wolf blew the first little pig’s house down.
After the big bad wolf the the first little pig’s house down the first little pig ran all the way to the 2nd little pig’s house and ran inside the 2nd little pig made his house out of sticks and was still decorating the inside of his house he was the 2nd oldest.then the wolf bad wolf again little pig little pig let me in the 2nd little pig and the first little pig replied not on the hair of my chiny chin chin
then the wolf said again i will huff and puff and blow your house down so the wolf blew the 2nd little pigs house down.
The 2nd little pig and the first little pig got scared and ran to the third little pig’s house and ran inside and locked the door the third little pig was the oldest he made his house out of brick’s and had cameras everywhere to make sure the big bad wolf doesn't come. when the wolf came to the third little pig’s house he said again little pig little pig let me in the three of the pig’s replied not on the hair of my chiny chin chin then wolf said i will huff and puff and blow your house down so the tried to the the house down but he couldn’t the house was to strong to blow down so he made a plan and climbed up the roof then he went thru the chimney but he didn’t know the the pig’s made a fire so when he climbed in the chimney and got burned and the other big bad wolf’s got angry and the three little pig’s lived happily ever after.
The End
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